Common Cold

May 3, 2015 21:20
Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.

I think I probably caught a cold.

I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
今日は一日中、頭が痛く、喉の調子も変で、気分が悪かったです。

恐らく風邪を引いたのだと思います。

沢山寝て、早く治したいです。
No. 1　thethinker83's correction
  • Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.
  • Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.
    　I deleted "a" since there is pain in more than one place (head and throat).
  • I think I probably caught a cold.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Take care!
kanotown
Thank you so much for your correction and kind comment! :D
No. 2　Timmy's correction
May your recovery be a quick and zippy one!
kanotown
Thank you for your comment!
I have completely recovered. :D
Timmy
Good for you!
No. 3　Eddie's correction
  • Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I think I probably caught a cold.
  • I think I probably caught a cold.
    　It's ok, but a bit redundant. Have only "think" or "probably" in the sentence
  • I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
お大事に
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting me!
もう元気になりました。(^^)
No. 4　Sunny's correction
  • Today, I have had a pain in my head and throat, and felt awful almost all day.
  • Today, I have had this pain in my head and throat, and I've felt awful almost all day.
  • I think I probably caught a cold.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I'd like to recover from the cold by getting enough sleep.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Get well soon!!
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting me!
I'm well now. :D
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